Marte rahe wo log,
Main sochta raha...
Jalte rahe mahal,
Main sochta raha...
Kyoon ro rahe the log, un lashoon se lipat kar...
Main hi kyoon bach gaya,
Main sochta raha...
Goliyoon ke woh nishan, Wo khoon ke dhaabe,
Hai kaun gunehgar,
Main sochta raha....
Kal muskura raha tha, Wo ek chotta sa baccha,
Kyoon hai khada shamshaan main,
Main sochta raha...
Bhaashan diye netaon ne, Maine woh sab sune,
Kyoon aam aadmi mara,
Main sochta raha...
Bach gaye hain log kuch,
Kyoon mar gaya insaan,
Main sochta raha...
Main sochta raha..
Wow! really a nice composition .It almost brought tears in my eyes.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work Abhi.
NICE ONE ABHI...
ReplyDeleteWow...
ReplyDeletecan feel that wince while i read it...
just go to the peak of ur imagina...
too gud!
mene poem padhi
ReplyDeleteor sochta raha.....
abhi tak soch raha hun..........
shyd sochta hi reh jaunga.......
ki aakhir tu kya sochta raha??
btw nice one.........
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ReplyDeletebadhiya hai dost
ReplyDeletegud one buddy. its quite impressive and expressive too
ReplyDeletevery nice composition yaar khare ji
ReplyDeletenice composition yaar
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